Tuesday, May 27, 2014

WRITING 3 NARRATIVE TEXT : TOM AND JERRY RELATIONSHIP



TOM AND JERRY RELATIONSHIP

In this year I will be 20 years old. During my 20 year, I lived with my parent and my brother. My brother was 7 years younger than me and as a normal sister I wanted to have good relationship with him. I wanted to close with him and we have a harmonious relationship but it never happened. I was 7 years older than him and he never respected me as her older sister. We always fight at home. We just like Tom and Jerry and I never got along with him. 
For 6 years, I was only child in my family. My parents really loved me and care with me. I was very happy because all of my parent attentions were just for me. I felt free and happy to be only child. However I also felt lonely because I didn’t have friend to play with at home. My parents were working at hotel and I was at home alone with my aunt. I was very envy when I saw my friends were playing with her brother/sister at their home. I wanted to have a brother or sister too. After 7 years, I finally got a brother. I was very happy and excited. I promise that I would take care of him and loved him very much.  He was my mood boaster when I felt sad or tired after I came back from school. He was so cute and adorable.  I hope that he will be good boy and handsome boy later.
When he attended a kindergarten, he started to have bad habit. He was bravely to ignore what I asked. He wasn’t only brave with me but also with my parents. He fought what my parents said to him and he also didn’t respect them. He started to be impolite. He didn’t call me sister and just call me by my name as my parents call me. I little bit upset with that. He didn’t respect me and treat me as his friends. He always teased me when I was studying or doing something. Whenever I tried to scold him, he would tell my parent and my parents would scold me back.
Because of that reason, our relationship was never harmonious. We always fought at home make some noise. When I was in Senior High School, I had to live apart from my parents. At that time I felt so happy because I didn’t have to fight with my brother and I could have my peaceful life. However, I usually missed him and wanted to see him. Although we live apart for several days, it didn’t mean our relationship got better. It instead made our relationship more distant and awkward. We still had to fight or argue for something.  Whenever we fought, my parent would always help him and blame me. They would ask me to give up and let my brother win. I couldn’t do anything except to let him do whatever he wants. I felt little bit upset because It was unfair for me to always blame for whatever ever I do to him.
We had been together for 13 years and during that time we never had good relationship. We always fought and argue for something. He always disturbed me and teased me whenever I was at home. I prefer to keep silent and let him to do what he wants. I didn’t want to get blame from my parent anymore. My parent always told to us that we were like Tom and Jerry who always fought every time we meet each other.      

7 comments:

  1. I know what you feel dinna.. My sister is 7 years younger than I, but I think you should try to more closer with your brother like what I did with my sister know.. :D

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  2. Hi Dina, nice to visit your blog.
    it is a good writing i think, which tell the reader about your relationship with your younger brother.but, i want to comment your writing. you should pay more attention on your grammar, such as 'i was 7 years older than him. It will be better if you use i am 7 years older than him.
    thank you Dina :)

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  3. A good writing and also a good story Dina, ^^
    But I think you have to pay more attention in your grammar like what ariani said :D

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  4. Well Dina, I know what it’s feel because I experience it also. I have a younger brother and he is so annoying.
    You have a good content Dina, but I found something strange in your paragraph, what is that mean by “whatever ever”? I’m sorry Dina.
    Overall, you have a great writing Dina.

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  5. Nice to read your writing Dina :D
    You write a good story. The content is a good too.
    Like the other friends said you should to pay more attention in your grammar.
    Good Job Dina!!

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  6. good story Dina, your mechanic and your vocabulary is good, keep writing,,,,

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