Tuesday, May 27, 2014

WRITING 3 DESCRIPTIVE TEXT : MY BEST FRIEND FOREVER



MY BEST FRIEND FOREVER
“a friendship is priceless and never be forgotten”. That is one of my favorite quotes of poetry that I read before. I think is true. I ever had that kind of thing in my live. It was when I’m in Junior high school. I had a friend that is always with me wherever I go. We are always together in same class for 3 years. Although she has some bad side but I still like her. It’s because she is very royal and trustworthy. She has good appearance, good personality and she is trustworthy and mature.
She is a girly person. She loves pink very much. She also has good style of fashion. She is not too tall. Her height is about 159 cm. She has fair skin. Her hair is long and straight. The part of her body that she very likes is her hair. She always keeps it smooth and long. She has small eyes. Whenever she smile or laugh her eyes almost close and it looks so cute. She has friendly smile. Her friendly smile makes everyone like her and she is very easily to have a friend.
She also has good personality. She is so kind to all people even she didn’t know them. She is very patient. She is never angry to other people. She isn’t a smart but she always does her home work by herself. She is also clean and tidy person. All of her stuff is organize very well.  Her hobby is cooking. She always bought her food to the school and gives it to her friend to taste it. One thing that I dislike from her is when she was in bad mood. She is a cheerful and cute person, but when she was in bad mood, she could be so quiet. She would say anything to me and ignored everyone around her.
She is the only one that I can trust. Whenever I have problem about everything, I always told it to her. She is the only one who knows my entire secret. She keeps my secret very well. She never told it to everyone although it was my parent. She is younger than me but she is so mature and wise. She is always solving some problem so wisely. She taught me to be more patient and confident with myself. She is advice me to be better. She told me what is right and what is wrong.
Our friendship has been 6 years and we still close as first time we meet. Although we live in different regency but we still keep on contact to each other. She is a friend that I can’t forget forever. She always takes care of me. She is good person who can make all of her friend happy and smile. She has good appearance, good personality and all people trust her some much include me. I’m very lucky to have her to be my friend.

3 comments:

  1. same with my comment in ayu padmi blog.. You should happy to have friend who can be your real friend .. Because I think now it is hard to find a good and kind friend ...

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  2. hi Dina, actually your writing is good but you have to be consistent in the use of tense. besides, you also have to pay attention on your diction and you may enrich your vocabulary. keep writing! ;)

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  3. Good Job Dina...
    Your writing is good and interesting but you should pay attention more on the grammar...
    Good luck :)

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