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Simple Way to Clean Up Your Messy Room after The Party.
That is a simple way to clean up our messy room after the
party. All of we need just do it step by step. This is the step that you need
to do. First, of all you need to prepare the entire cleaning tool such as:
broom, dustbin, mop, cleaning floor liquid etc. After, that rearrange all of the things that
scattered on the floor and put them to the right place. Third, sweep the
rubbish on the floor and put it into the dustbin. Then, mop the floor and make it clean using
cleaning floor liquid. Last, use air refresher in the room to make a good
smell. It is so simple and now you can enjoy your new fresh room.
Very helpful but you forgot bring comma in the 8th sentence :) .
ReplyDeletethanks for the correction lita. i will correct it :)
DeleteIt is quite good tips, but i think you must add some pictures about messy room,
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thank you
thank you wisnu :)
Deleteover all, your paragraph is quite good. I just want to comment about your grammar and mechanics in your paragraph. I think you should remember to put comma after time order and transition signal, especially in second, third and eighth of your sentence. thank you Dinnaaaa :D
ReplyDeletethank you lisna :)
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